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Friday, 21 March 2014
Who am I? Poem
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
This poem is delightful Xi. All the lines in the poem are correct except for your alliteration line.
Alliteration is when you repeat the same consonant sound e.g Peter painted pink paper playfully.
So you might need to go back and fix that line up so it reflects alliteration. Also you may want to fix the swat to sweat which is more of a human characteristic and thus is personification.
1 comment:
This poem is delightful Xi. All the lines in the poem are correct except for your alliteration line.
Alliteration is when you repeat the same consonant sound e.g Peter painted pink paper playfully.
So you might need to go back and fix that line up so it reflects alliteration. Also you may want to fix the swat to sweat which is more of a human characteristic and thus is personification.
Keep up the great work in writing Xi.
MH
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